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Page 6 and Final

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:iconpsycho-king:
I believe you did an excelent job. If it was a bit longer I could easily mistake it for the graphic novels in the bookstore. Personally, I'm glad you didn't try and lengthen it; you could of done so in several parts of the fight, but keeping it the way it is works just fine.

For the accual art style, I think this is your best work ever, mainly because you perfectly mixed your normal character shading with an accual background. To do so and keep it consistant thru even 6 pages is a talent worthy of reconition.

I can't wait to see more. ^_^
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:iconnate-san:
Beautiful. You've certainly done a supreme job on this. I like the expressions they have in the last panel.

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Love doesn't lead to the dark side. Passion can lead to rage and fear, and can be controlled, but passion is not the same as love. Controlling your passions while being in love, that's what they should teach you to beware, but love itself will save you
:iconeruantien-fett:
Let me know when you stick this in its own folder...I'll fave the whole thing. Very well done, both artwise and storywise. My major kudos.

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"Originality is the fine art of remembering what you hear but forgetting where you heard it."
--Laurence J. Peter
:iconcirck:
Wasn't rhymi supposed to be the "biblio" type of woman? It disturbs me a little to se her that way, but it's really ok. A really interesting story and, except for the sound efects ("shhhhffft"), the rest is simply perfect.

10/10 to you!
:iconeverlaststar:
Well, I would assume, and not just because she's mine, that being hunted by society itself for what you are would probably make her be a bit more of a survivor/fighter. She's still smart, but she can kick arse as well. She's in no way timid.

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*~*~Dig deeper.
Remember all you've been and all you've left behind.
Wave goodbye, my dear.
:iconfalcolf:
Aww that's quite sad. :( Sucks to be Jedi in this period, great looking comic though; very professional! Love the effects. :D

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Walking on two legs has nothing to do with intelligence. - Lord Kayoss

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:iconcaetis:
In all your work is both impressive, and immersive. Very well done, look forward to seeing more of it.

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Be Drinkable, or be Exploded

There is no Peace
There is only Passion
Through Passion I gain Strength
Through Strength I gain Power
Through Power I gain Victory
Through Victory my chains are Broken
The Force shall set me free
:iconscythexv8:
Loved every single page!

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"Don't blame me. Blame yourself or God..."
~ Delita, Final Fantasy Tactics
"Please define the scientific explanation of the whamy..."
~ Scully, X Files
:icongr8panda:
Amazing Job ... Keep up the great work.
:iconbladewarrior:
Only Jedi and can kiss and talk at the same time. xD

Good job on the mini comic! Hopefully you'll be able to make a volume 2.

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